Evaluation

I am trying to portray the importance of human translators in healthcare in each paragraph highlighting the risks of using AI tools. I think I have included information about AI and human translators and which one performs better in each paragraph. I think a reader might not face any trouble as I try to make a smoother transition within paragraphs. The topic I displayed in each paragraph is trending news nowadays so I guess most of the readers are aware of my topic . Between paragraph 3 and 5, paragraph 4 might be confusing to them as I didn’t do a clear transition after paragraph 3. I am thinking of adding paragraph 3 and 4 together so that my essay can have a smooth transition. I believe some of the paragraphs are pointing towards the same topic I stretch some lines many times . For example, the potential risks of using AI and AI makes errors, both of the topics highlight the negative sides of AI. I am thinking of combining them and making a clear transition so that readers won’t feel like reading the same things in different sentences. My answer is negative as one paragraph is not representing several topics at the same time. I am ensuring each paragraph solely focuses on one main topic. Thus it will help readers to understand the topic. I believe I didn’t address any topic that’s not related with my thesis statement. In my research essay I want to show the importance of human translators in healthcare, which cannot be replaced by AI. I think I have cleared my argument in the thesis statement and basis that I am working on my essay.